Nice
It's sad to see so many idiots reviewing quality animation and critiquing based upon what they wanted out of it, and not what it gives. It tells a story, there is no part 2. Catchy?...It's not a stinking britney song, it's art. The ending provides closure to the story, what more do you want. Good job Alex.
Nice
regardless of the begging for points, I believe the work still stands on it's own merit. How many out there have done the same thing? I thought it was pretty original to create a flash movie specifically to garner more points. Aside form that, it's aesthetic appeal in itself kept my interest.
increase the tempo
You have plenty of dialog, but you need to increase the tempo and maintain it to make it seem funnier than it is.
It's not something to "get", just take it in...
I thought it was very well done stylistically and the music was nicely implemented. I'm sure the intro music was taken from 2001: and that actually set the mood for what was to expect or not expect...chaos.
When you look at masterfull paintings in art galleries, you don't critique the canvas or the brushes used. You forget about the technicalities and focus on the whole. Gestalt comes to mind, for you fellow art/graphic design students.
Yes, it could have been a little more dynamic with the tempo or enhanced in spots, but that's overshadowed by being pulled in by the constantly evolving story and the emotions you're constantly sorting through while viewing it. That's what makes this a good piece.
Male
Joined on 2/18/03
"From my Room" 
Pink Floyd - Eclipse 
College University pt 1 
The Suitcase 